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Alu Rathbone
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PostSubject: A little help...   Sat Aug 16, 2008 3:30 am

Alright... i'm working on my book... and i'm jsut writing randomly... what ever comes to mind... but i need a little help with this part... I want to treat this like the stories thread... so please help me out in story form... remember this is just a rough copy and will be tweaked to be the right way... please don't insert random characters...

Your characters to choose from...

Main:
Elizabeth aka Ellie (the point of view story is from)
Wolfgang (the love interest of Ellie)

bad guy: hell if should know... first person to give him a name is the person we go with...

Elizabeth is a vampire
Wolfgang is a werewolf...

Their love is technically forbidden but they have the protection of the queen... Regina armonzia...

If you want more characters... just pm me...and i'll give you more to work with...

this is from teh end of a chapter and then the very beggining of one...

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I screamed as I ran. It was pointless but it was instinctual as was the running. The woods were dark adn dense but not a problem for my vampire eyes.

I could hear him behind me, tracking my every movement. One wrong turn on my part and i was as good as fire wood.

"Whats the matter Ms. Elizabeth? Are you afraid of the big bad wolf?" he called after me.

I knew if i answered he would be able to find me even faster then by following my scent alone.

I turned a corner and instantly regretted doing so. I would have turned around but i sensed he was close so i continued to run down the long but dead end path. I knew i wouldn't be able to escape.

"Please dear Lord save me from this travesty."

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Chapter __: ___________________

I reached the dead end quicker then anticipated. I stopped just before reaching the end of the ledge. I dropped the skirt of my ballgown and turned to face my pursuer.

"The ultimate prize." He murmured to himself. "A vampire."

I backed slowly towards the edge and was praying that God would show mercy and save me.

Flashback

"Ellie, I don't want you to come. It's dangerous for your kind." Wolfgang had told me. "Vampires are hunted like... like... like humans. Mesria is not a place for you even if you were invited. I'm sorry my love."

I had looked at him as if this was ludacrisy.

"I'm going Wolfgang and nothing you say will stop me."

End Flashback


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Thats as far as i got... and i know it sounds cheesy... i'm sorry about that... please jsut help...

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PostSubject: Re: A little help...   Sat Aug 16, 2008 9:10 pm

It's not that bad Mom, really. I actually like it a lot so far.
i would check out that book from the library. lol! Very Happy
what don't you like about it so far?

As for the name of your bad "guy" how about... wait do you want a name from like the 1800's or some Quillete-y name or just a modern name?
^(sorry i sometimes make a big deal over little things!)
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PostSubject: Re: A little help...   Sun Aug 17, 2008 4:17 am

He's a werewolf... it doesn't matter what... really it doesn't... i'm not sure...

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PostSubject: Re: A little help...   Sat Sep 27, 2008 12:53 am

Can I name the bad guy??? Bad guy- I dub thee Antonio Sebastian!
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PostSubject: Re: A little help...   Sat Sep 27, 2008 4:42 am

oooo I like that sonia... i'll consider that one! lol...

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PostSubject: Re: A little help...   Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:26 pm

haha... camp memories.... Antonio Sebastian... *snickers*
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